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Tom dreams have a healthy eat,do more sports,have a strone healthy to do others.Mary wants to go to Hongkong by air,because the Hongkong is the heaven of the shopping.Millie wants have enough time play her favorite educate games,and study english .I want to be a teacher in the future.I will study hard for my dream.
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