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2006年四川高考写作范文:良好饮食习惯

发布时间:2013-06-21 18:03浏览次数:1264
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假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括:


部分同学的饮食习惯
不吃早餐
爱吃零食
偏食

饮食过量


良好的饮食习惯

饮食多样化

饮食定时定量


个人看法

重要性:有助于身体健康……


注意:1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
      2.发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数;
      3.词数:100左右。

      4.参考词汇:偏食be particular about food  零食snack


Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it' s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.
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That’s all. Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Dear friends, As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it' s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, some students don't like to eat breakfast, they is fond of snacks. What's worse, they're particulai about food. They always like to eat meats and clips, they don't like eating vagetables. And sometimes they eat so much. Obviously, it is bad for them. So, it is important foa us to form healthy eating habits. To begin with, not only eating meats, but also we need to eat vagetables. Secondly, we should eat meals on time. Besides, we should not eat many snacks. If we can do them, we will be better and better. In my views, it's benefial for our body to form healthy eating habits and to help us become healthy.

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