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The most Interesting Place I was born in a small countryside and my family moved several places when I was a little girl. But the place we live would never far away from my hometown where I was born. And the small countryside is also the place I am going to take my foreign friend to visit. I lived in there for 8 years and I spent my most unforgettable time with my brothers. Though we don't live there, we will come back every year.