托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第25篇:人们的成功是否只与努力工作有关与运气无关

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章用词灵活多样，学术词汇使用也比较准确。

The success is a subjective appraisal whether a person has achieved at his or her prime target,that is,turn the original dreams into facts.It is no controversial to make such judgment that to be successful hardworking is necessary and important,nonetheless on the other hand,the influences and impacts of the luck become a significant dispute which never seems to be solved appropriately forever. As to me,I think highly of the chances ones can obtain to make progress all the time because of a statement made by a famous and great physicist who established the firm and solid bases to bolster the modern scientific development.The main opinion of the statement is that although hardworking provides 99 percent of the effort to be successful,the rest namely luck is the most crucial. Holding such stance,not only result from the former saying,but also derive from average experiences.From the history courses and newsletters,I witness so many events that I have to form the attitude.For example,a man was talent and wrote a lot of excellent dissertations to introduce his views to certain subjects.However,he fail to make his ideas known by the world due to the compression of his stupid leader.Finally,he caught a great oppotunity to make a lecture to other experts and researchers,and from that time,he reach his dream.