2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

学术词汇能比较准确的使用，不过拼写错误稍多；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段。

Nowadays,many of people are highly of appearence. The commodities were decorated over by manufactors.As far as I concerned,I disagree this phenomenon.Firstly,it will waste source.Secondly,it will acconut for dishonesty effect to the consumers and it is hard to make a good quanlity for marketing. No one is willing to continue buy it and it will disappear in market.At last,I think consumer buy it ability for use,not for its decoration.Therefore,I suggested that consumer should keep a concept of rational consumption.And the manufacter should focus on quanlity more than decorate.