2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。

AS we can vividly see in the diagram about 2011 Education pays,in general,the higher degree a person has ,the higher pay the person will get and the less chance of unemployment. The message conveyed in the diagram is clear.As students,what we should do is to study harder and achieve high degrees,which are relevant to our salaries. However,does high degree must can make our have a bright future?We cannot agree that. Many people who do not get high grades in their school career,even some of them often fail some subjects.But they also achieve success depending on their talent in only one field.For example,many people unwillling to learn knowledge from the text prefer to do bussiness.In this way ,they also fullfil their dreams. All in all,degree is an important factor for your salary.Nevertheless,there is not only a way to succeess.