2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

AS we can vividly see in the diagram about 2011 Education pays,in general,the higher degree a person has,the higher pay the person will get and the less chance of unemployment. The message conveyed in the diagram is clear.As students,what we should do is to study harder and achieve high degrees,which are relevant to our salaries. However,does high degree must can make our have a bright future?We cannot agree that. Many people who do not get high grades in their school career,even some of them often fail some subjects.But they also achieve success depending on their talent in only one field.For example,many people unwilling to learn knowledge from the text prefer to do business.In this way ,they also fulfill their dreams. All in all,degree is an important factor for your salary.Nevertheless,there is not only a way to success.