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I have a good friend, Her name is XiaoYang. She comes from Austrialia, She is beautify girl and she has gold hair.she like sporting, we often play tennis on Sunday. She is also my classmate. we are studying in the same University. She is good at Math and I'm good at History.She very like to living in China and we ofter talk about the difference of culture between Austrialia and China.