简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
How to study English? Do you know English is a very important lauguage? A lot of people speak English. For example, when you go to Japan, but you don't know Japanese. When you lost your way, and ask someone about your hotal in English. I might the one know it. But you speak in English, I might not the one know your mean. Now I will go to a big company, but they need one man that speak and write English. So you know English that is very important. How to improve your English? You are hardworking study English. Now you must be keep the below four points. First, more listen. You listen English about anything at least 45 minute. Second, more read. You must be read a book a week. Third, more talk. You must be talking with anyone and any choice. last, more writing. You write a English composition each day. I believe your English is to improve.