作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
As one of the most bewitching and international cities in China, I strongly recommend you, my dearest friends, to pay a visit to my hometown—-Beijing. It is the capital of China for several dynasties over a long period. In the meantime, it has now evolved into the political, cultural and educational center.There are many places of interests here in Beijing, among which the Summer Palace is the most interesting attraction. The Summer Palace is situated in the western outskirts of Beijing, and it is one of the most classical gardens in China, which enjoys a worldwide reputation. The most alluring scenery is Kunming Lake, with an exquisite building in the middle, and it involves three parts which are mainly used as the ancient empress’s living quarter. I’m sure you can definitely experience the characteristic and traditional culture of China. Hope you could enjoy your trip!