小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, her name is Lily. Lily is eight years old. She has big eyes and long hair. She is active and funny. She likes playing the violin, going hiking and rowing a boat. She goes to school on foot. And she is good at English. Every weekend I play with her. She is my best friend.