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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33623
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

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评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

How to Be a Consumer As a student,we have many ways to earn money, such as take a part-time job as a waiter or deliver newspaper.But the money we earn is not very much,for most of us ,our income is almost from parents,which is often limited.Therefore,students often make use of every penny to get what he want.For example,we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale.As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of this way to spend money. Firstly,money is hard-won no mater who earns the money.As the saying goes:honor to frugality; shame to extravagance.Thrift is a virtue that we ought to have.

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