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How to Be a Consumer As a student,we have many ways to earn money, such as take a part-time job as a waiter or deliver newspaper.But the money we earn is not very much,for most of us ,our income is almost from parents,which is often limited.Therefore,students often make use of every penny to get what he want.For example,we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale.As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of this way to spend money. Firstly,money is hard-won no mater who earns the money.As the saying goes:honor to frugality; shame to extravagance.Thrift is a virtue that we ought to have.