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With the development of recreation, people are becoming increasingly like to participate in activities. Recently, China’s Got Talent has become one of the most popular entertainment programmers. As we all know, different people usually have different purposes to take part in it. Some people participate in it to make their dreams of stardom come true; others participate in it to challenge themselves and prove to other people that they can do everything they want to do well. For my part, my purpose is to rise up fame overnight. When I was a little child, I want to be an actor. Participate in China’s Got Talent is a great way to realizes my star dream. Stand on the stage I can show myself to everyone around the world. Moreover, there is no limit on age, status, color of skin or others, as long as you have a dream you can take part in China’s Got Talent. From the above, it is easy to draw the conclusion that participate in China’s Got Talent is a good way to make our dreams come true. So, as long as you have dream you can participate in and you got a chance to become famous.