2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；文中词汇表达多样性要加强，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Mobile Phone Useful or Bad Different people have different views,about use mobile phone useful or bad.some people agrent use moblie phone is good for ourself,we can read to a lot of message.other while agure moile phone have influence to our heathly. In my opinion , I agrent first opinion.First I thinks we can get views about this world through the mobile phone.other we can konws lots of poeple,such as QQ and weixin,weibo ect. But we don't usually use mobile phone,can't