2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；文中词汇表达不灵活，同时存在拼写错误；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

with the development of science and techonology,more and more people possess their private computer .At present ,computer play an important role in our daily life .it makes our life more convinient. for example ,we cango shopping on the internet, and we can listen to great music and we canlearn english