Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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With the development of information technology,computer has become an important part of our life.And online courses brings so many conveniences to our study.So should open online courses replace traditional classroom teaching?This has been confusing,but I think online courses couldn't replace troditional teaching.On the one hand,classroom teaching is a special form of traditional teaching.In this way,students can communicate with teachers face to face.Teachers could know their students' reaction while students can enjoy the powerful teaching of their teachers.However,the computer screen is a hateful wall that separates their once close relationship.One the other hand,many students can't be self-restrained very well when there are so many temptations.Such as computer games ,unhealthy informations,online shopping,online romance and so on.As thses attractive things around students,it is difficult for them to devote themselves to online courses. In my point of view,although internet become more common in our lives,traditional class teaching was and will forever be the leading character in the theaching forms.