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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;文章词汇丰富度较好,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;请注意分段。

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With the development of information technology,computer has become an important part of our life.And online courses brings so many conveniences to our study.So should open online courses replace traditional classroom teaching?This has been confusing,but I think online courses couldn't replace troditional teaching.On the one hand,classroom teaching is a special form of traditional teaching.In this way,students can communicate with teachers face to face.Teachers could know their students' reaction while students can enjoy the powerful teaching of their teachers.However,the computer screen is a hateful wall that separates their once close relationship.One the other hand,many students can't be self-restrained very well when there are so many temptations.Such as computer games ,unhealthy informations,online shopping,online romance and so on.As thses attractive things around students,it is difficult for them to devote themselves to online courses. In my point of view,although internet become more common in our lives,traditional class teaching was and will forever be the leading character in the theaching forms.

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