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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请加强词汇表达的多样性，但请注意检查拼写的拼写。
In fact,I certianly support this kind of opinion.I also think that it is a smart way to save money.It seen that is not a unuseless way to save money. The resons of my viewpoint are following:On one hand,as a student,most of our ask money for our parents.We are consumers and lack of the ability on earning.SO we should careful with our money in daily life.what is more,wo have no right for wasting moeny since it comes from the hard work of our dear parents. Even though we do some part-time jod and earn money by own,we should not waste money.All of tihs due to the traditonal virtue of our Chinese-save is a virtue. On the other hand,using group-buy dealsb and all kinds of coupons,buying on sale clothes is a smart way to save money.It is more cheaper than no use it. consequetlly,there many ways to save money.As a comsumer,we should comsume nationality.
