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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；文章用词有些单一，请加强单词拼写的检查；连词使用偏少。
learning from internet old says that never too old to learn! but sometimes our learning was restrict in many ways, for example, people want to study only from books and teacher. nevernessless, as the internet develop, people could learn from internet. but for internet we cant't learn more except book, and go throught the internet people can study by themselves or obtain more information. otherwise, obtain information doesn't mean education. education is kind of connection with our soul, is the process to pursuit the truth. simple obtain information just known the information whatever it is true or false. all in all, we can learn throught internet but we must pursuit the truth!
