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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9041
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Learning From Internet Old says that never too old to learn! But sometimes our learning was restricted in many ways, for example, people want to study only from books and teacher. Nevernessless, as the internet develop, people could learn from the internet. But for internet cant't we learn more knowledge except book, and go through the internet people can study by themselves or obtain more information. Otherwise,we obtain information simple doesn't mean education. Education is kind of resonance connection with our soul, is the process of truth that we pursuit it.We obtain information simple just known the information whatever it is true or false. All in all, we can learn through internet but we owe to pursuit the truth!

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