2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；采用了一些简单的从句；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。

Crrentily in pulied has teli.have a som people in diffentily chat in the Internet world or work,but li also has people will the malevolent use of today. I did not love Internetworld,becuse I did not other Internet world.If has Internet I can made friends online. Often chat on the Internet will bring communicatin ability to drop, a moment of pleasure is good, but is not long.I holp people's don't depend too much on the Internet.