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It's unwise to get a conclusion through what you see and what you hear As we all know,many people always make a conclusion only by what they see and what they hear.But,I think it's very unwise.Let me tell some reasons about it. On one hand,what you see isn't real in many scents,sometimes some people make a joke on the persons what they don't like or even hate,
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