小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少。

My good friend I have a good friend .He is a boy .My best riend needs many things: a bed,a chair ,some pictures and some toys. Sometimes my friend likes to go to the library . He is a student. He is very busy. He has short black hair ,small eyes ,a small nose and small ears .He's tall and thin .What's his name?Ha,ha ,his name is Zhong Zheng. He is the best friend of mine.We often play together.