2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As is vividly depicted in the picture ,many people pay attention to surfing on line,either to play games or to meet their work requirement.The episode crystallizes the implication that nowadays people over the world are pulled to closer than ever before by the internet. There is no denying that the internet furnish us with much help.That the internet connect individual with the world is the most prominent influence of the internet. People everywhere could talk with certain topic conveniently without face-to-face,which is barely envisaged 100 years ago when a letter from Hangzhou to Beijing may spend two months.The internet,however, trouble us a great deal as well. For example, many persons who are lack of self-control may be addicted to the internet. It is bad news for parents that their children obsess over games on the internet, which may destroy their children’s future. Benefits have been weighted against harmful outcomes. And generalization have proved difficult. In my perspective, proper initiatives must be to adopted to limit the disadvantage and the great efforts should be exerted to promote the advantage of the internet.`For one thing, people should take full use of the internet to diminish distance between people.Moreover, avoid excessive dependence of computer.