小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

lucy is my best friend ,she is very cute.we always go to school together.she often goes my home to find me.her mother is a teacher and her father is an engineer.they are both very nice person.they treat me like their own child.lucy like me very much,she give her own doll.we used to go some swimming in summer near our school.