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Making Life Meaningfull Meaningfull life--everyone holds the diffrent point to it. To illustrate, maybe full of property is meaningful. Perhaps devoting oneself into what he likes is meaningfull. Or probably, making everyday happy is meaningfull life. And in my eyes,contributing my love to warm others is the greatest use that will outlast it. Just as an old saying "Giveing your love to the one who need love when you need love is the greatest love". Why I say that view? Summerizely, there are three reasons. To start with, by helping others, not only they can be away from difficulties, but also ourselves could achieve great warm. In other words, both of us are benifited. Secondly, sharing my help with those who are in need is just meanfull. The last but not least, those who get helped will also do the same thing and pass their help and love to others. Just imagine, how beautifull and kind the world will be. No matter how you think what is meaningfull life, the important is how you make it meaningfull and extending the meanfulling as long as possible, but not just the meaningfull life in your mouth.
