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Making Life Meaningful Meaningful life--everyone holds the different point to it. To illustrate, maybe full of property is meaningful. Perhaps devoting oneself into what he likes is meaningful. Or probably, making everyday happy is meaningful life. And in my eyes,donating my love to warm others is the greatest use that will outlast it. Just as an old saying "Giving your love to whomever in need when you need love is the greatest love". Why I say that view? Summerizely, there are three reasons. To start with, by aiding others, not only they can be away from difficulties, but also ourselves could achieve great warmness. In other words, both of us are benefited. Secondly, sharing my help with those who are in need is just meanful. Last but not least, those who get helped will also do the same thing and pass their help and love to others. Just imagine, how beautiful and kind the world will be. No matter what you define meaningful life is, the important is how you make it meaningful and extending the significance as long as possible, but not just the meaningful life in your mouth.
