小学二年级英语作文:My pet

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in my 4 years old . my mother bought a dog to me.it very cute.it 's write and black. we all call it''writewrite'' . i like it very muth.it like to eat meat and fish and so on. i with it go to park for a walk after dinner. it and me are good friends and i think everyone will like dogs by themselves.