雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，文中有较多拼写错误；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

there is increasing number of people choose to travel overses in present days. i believe that it more likely to have a positive impact on individual and society,although some drawbacks exist such as the influence on environment. traveling overseas can give people more opportunities to expand their horizen .people can be exposure to different cultural and develop a better understanding of other countries' cultures.in this way,they are able to have a better idea of lifestyles, customs and beliefs of other countries'. they will become more open-minded and change their attitudes towards other cultures. there are also make profits for government and society from tourism.traveling to foreign countries can not only create revenue to input countries,but also can promost consumption in deomestical industries.for example,people are incline to buy flight ticket of domestical airline because of the lower cost carries,this is means airline companies can make profits . on the other hand ,it may put threat to our environment.Going to other countries especailly to countries with distance,airplane is the best choice of other means of transport.enormous greenhouse gas emission would be created and lead to severe air pollution.the poor environmental condition will compromise the life quality of everyone. in conclusion,there are many advantages of traveling overseas,but we cannot ignore the disadvantages like air pollution.