希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear John, You invited Lily and me to dinner this evening. I said that I would be your house at six o'clock this evening. But I am going to join the important test. The English test is very hard for me. so my English is poor. I hate it. Last time, I couldn't answer English test. So I got a low mark. This time, I must be working hard. So I can't to join the dinner. By the way, I hope that we will have a party next time. I am sure you are enjoy your dinner. Best wish. Li Hua.