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作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Miss Zhu, Time flies in the blink of an eye! It has been a few months since I left high school. I miss you extremely and I still remember you in my heart, because you’re the best teacher in my mind. The reason why I say that is that you not only deliver me knowledge, but also taught me how to study. You ever told me that the values of life lies not in the lengths days, but in use we make of them. I have actually benefited a lot from you. So I would like to show my great thanks to you, and share my life in college with you. Now I’m studying in Ningde Normal College. I major in hotel management. I believe it can provide me with a prosperous future. As far as I’m concerned, the teachers in our major are knowledgeable, experienced, and warm-hearted. And my classmates are nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I could enjoy a good atmosphere of study. When I have difficulty in study, I always turn to my teachers for help or discuss with my classmates. Thanks to their help, I have made great progress in my study. College life is much different from high school life. In college, we should acquire knowledge as well as improve our social and practical abilities. There are also a variety of classes for us to learn. And it also holds various extracurricular activities, which give us a good chance to show our talent. Life seems very busy here, but it’s so fruitful for me. I will never give up my dreams. I spoke at length. It’s high time that I should stop now. What about your present life? I hope to hear from you soon. Finally, I hope everything goes well with you. Best wishes to you and your family. Yours sincerely, Liming
