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作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Dear Miss Zhu, Time flies in the blink of an eye! It has been a few months since I left high school. I miss you extremely and I still remember you in my heart, because you’re the best teacher in my mind. The reason why I still remember you is that you not only deliver us knowledge, but also taught us how to study. What’s more, you ever told us that the values of life lies not in the lengths days, but in use we make of them. It’s a truly fact that we have actually benefited a lot from you. Therefore I would like to show my gratitude to you, and share my life in college with you. Now I’m studying in Ningde Normal College. I am major in hotel management. The reason why I choose the major is that I believe it can provide me with a prosperous future. In addition, as far as I’m concerned, the teachers in our major are knowledgeable, experienced, and warm-hearted. And my classmates are nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I could enjoy a good atmosphere of study. When I have difficulty in study, I always turn to my teachers for help or discuss with my classmates. Thanks to their help, I have made great progress in my study. Here another aspect I want to share with you, which is that the life in college is much different from high school life. For example, in college, we should acquire knowledge as well as improve our social and practical abilities. Besides, there are also a variety of classes for us to learn, and it usually holds various extracurricular activities, which will give us a good chance to show our talent. Therefore, Life seems very busy here, but it’s so fruitful for me. It’s high time that I should stop now. What about your present life? I hope to hear from you soon. Finally, I hope everything goes well with you. Best wishes to you and your family. Yours sincerely, Liming
