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Are dialects just as acceptable in public places? As acknowledged that most of us tend to adopt dialects to interacte with person ,especially in public places. However, with the rapid development of modern society, some of us faced embarrassment when confront with the situationn. Actually, i take a negtive view of the opinion. As the saying gose, when in Rome,do as Rmens. However, dialect isn't in the row. First, adopting Maridan is a kind of fundamental polite. At the same time, demonstrating the elegance and gentle to others. Second, avoiding using dialects in public so as to elimitate embarrassment .Because not all of us can catch the meaning whether the speaker want to say. According to the survey by News Agency, 56% persons are against using dialects in public. Moreover, some of the acdamics proposed canceling the right speaking dialects in public. last but not least, adopting Madarin in public can smooth the communication-gap between different person so that reducing the distance of each other. According to the analysis of above, nature conclusion can lead to the passage. To decline the trouble ,in other words, do not get others in trouble . Do not adopt dialects in public as possible as you can.