小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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Dragon Boat Festival,also name for Double Fith,is a traditional festival origated from China.The name of Double Fith comed from the day of May 5th.There are 3 most popular activities in Dragon Boat Festival,including eating zongzi,drinking regular wine and having a Dragon comprtion. Other usual activities hanging out Zhong kui's pictures,writing spells and wearing perfumed medicine bags.The ancient people believe that all these activities drivng reager wine can effectively keep people away from the illness and unhealth,lving a heath life.