2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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The exaggerating picture tell us the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life. In the picture ,many people ,both men and women are looking at their mobile phones while walking. In case they fall, they use walking sticks while crossing the street. This situation happens in any place where people overuse their phone If the dangerous and damaging phenomenon continues as it is , it will bring many problem. To begin with ,the chance of face to face communication will be reduced and the distance of intimate friends will be separated. Next ,some people, especially university and college students, will be addicted to using mobile phone and efect studying .Last but not least ,overusing phone will make people near-sighted. In my opinion.we should use mobile phone in a proper way .using mobile phone in right way is not only a good way to expand friend zone but also a prefect chance to widen horizon and acqurie the scope of knowledge