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新东方托福高分作文:你需要"永不放弃"吗?

发布时间:2013-07-30 17:05浏览次数:668
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题目要求:

The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

Never是一个绝对词。但是由于这是一个积极向上的说法,所以,要“很大程度上同意。”永不放弃的前提是“制订一个现实、可行、并有意义的计划”。
用户的作文(系统评分58.5分
评语:

采用了一些简单的从句;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

When you stucked in trouble,what is your choose?give up or never?As people,you must meet different troubles in your life,but you still live and have to continue life.People always try to lve as they were on hard time.Why i think that is due to 3 aspects. First of all,I think life is gift and i do not intend wasting it.So we should take every second and never say quit.Everybody knows that it is hard to get our goals.If you choose quit as you get stucked or at the begining,you will get nothing but nothing in your life.But if you choose continue going,you maybe get what you expect or you never hope get. Secondly,life is no under expectant gives what you expect.As i see the film of the mist,i shocked by the end of the film.People quited as they had not saw any hopes then they ended their life.So sad to those people.We always quit when we feel hopeless and even we do not know to face it.Face difficults is also way of never give up. Thirdly,the reason why we live is that we never quit and not scared by the unknow of future.Everyone knows that achieve goals needs never say quit.

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