字数:200满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
As is vividly shown in the picture, we can see clearly that there is a beautiful girl put on the traditional chinese costoms, she is from America, But we can find that she is very interested in the traditional chinese culture. Although the picture is simple, it is thought-provoking. It is without doubt that the picture aims at addressing a popular phenomenon prevailing in today's society. In the first place, it is no exaggeration to say that plenty of persons lack awareness. Therefore, traditional chinese culture. Exerts a great influence on our life. In the second place, so inferior is social supervision that it is harmful to our long-term development. It is not difficult to find that, in our society, it has prevented the harmony future. Last but not least, it is no exaggeration to say that is of significance to our country. The prosperity of a country largely depends on traditional chinese culture. . From the above analysis, we can safely get the conclusion that due attention should be paid to traditional chinese culture. For one thing, we should spare no effort to bring about economic returns and future social development. For the other, it is high time to take traditional chinese culture into consideration. Only when we solve the problem can we have a wonderful world.