2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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with the technology of science ,people 's mind become wider and wider.in our country ,many persons like celetrating western festvials ,such as christmas .in the futrue ,it could be impact on our national festvials,maybe it is interesting ,but we should not forget our festvials,.n the meanwhile,we should learn judging and decide how to do next,in this way,we can make our nature exist in the long time