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Listening is an excellent habit.Listening to someone shows the respect to him and it can also improve understanding and build a great relationship. So,who is to listen?How to be a good listener? For example,parents should listen to their kids.Kids are living in a fashion century.Most parents cannot follow them and many things they have the different idea with them.Thus, please find a time to listen to your children and talk about something that you and your kids always have the different opinion.These will help you understand you kids and solve the generation problem. As for teachers, the most essential thing is listening to them too.Teachers should know students well and if they have some request, teachers will content them. And the listening among the students can improve the friendship and learn from each other.You are supposed to listening to your classmates carefully and communicate with each other often.Hoping you can be a good listener!