2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

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I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain some advice from you. Last week, when I take a walk in the park, I happened to see an old man who fallen down suddenly and hurt himself. Passer-by were gather around, but it seemed no sign that anybody would offer his help. I was wonder when I pass through the scene, and hesitated whether I should offer my hands, for fear that I would be falsely accused. But now I am very much regret, and feeling guilty. I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible. Thank you for your kind assistance in this matter.