2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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My brother is enthusiastic that he often do something for others.I really respect him though he is only older two years than me.In past time,our neighbor is ill who named ** that is a cute girl.My brother took fruit for her so that she was so happy that cry.Thus he also gave him some flowers.The flowers were beautiful and colorful.And he told stories in a soft vice that who liked them.About a week went,the girl got well.she was really thanks my brother. My parents are proud of their older child.Therefor, I am look forward to getting a human who look like my brother!