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Looking around our daily life, we are easy to found that those who come up with conclusion directly merely by seeing or listening.Howevfer, as a matter of fact,it is unwise to do it,even stupid. There are serval reasons to prove this fact and i will list some as follows.First and foremost,we unable to distinguish the news ture or fault immediately.In this situation,if we directly draw a conclusion,we have a great chance to misled by the news.Additionly,in this progressingly develp society,the truth is far away our life .A good point in this point is netizen in China.Humen being always share their point online without considerary so that we often require the wrong news. Someone made a conclusion right away and then they may mistake something and somebady. From where i stand,we feel obliged to enhance our knowledge and improve our regonitive skills. Meanwhile,it is also inevidatable to thinking thoughtfully after seeing or listening.
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