采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章词汇表达丰富,若多用学术词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
Taking a look around our daily life, we easily find that those who come up with conclusion directly merely by seeing or listening.However, as a matter of fact,it is unwise to do it,even stupid. There are serval reasons to prove this fact and i will list some as follows.First and foremost,we unable to distinguish the news true or not immediately.In this situation,if we directly draw a conclusion,we have a great chance to misled by the news.Additionly,in this progressively develop society,the truth is far from our life .A good point in this point is netizen in China.Human being always share their ideas online without restraining so that we often require the wrong news. Someone made a conclusion at once and then they may mistake something and somebady. From where I stand,we feel obliged to enhance our knowledge and improve our regonitive skills. Meanwhile,it is also inevidatable to thinking thoughtfully after seeing or listening.
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