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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10403
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不自然;请注意分段。

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as the old saying, don't put you eggs into just one basket. but one coin has two sides. both of them have disadvantage and advantage. in my opinion, i hold a view that don't put all in a basket. on the one hand ,if you put your eggs into one basket, you will face more risk.such as you use your all money to buy golden, you thought golden's price will up, while, it's down quickly.at this time, what can you do? so put into one basket is wrong. on the other hand, you could get more thing, because you have another money to use. use for learning, travel, and so on. but if you just use to these, you also lose something.

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