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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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We easily judge others at the first glance. When someone comes into our sight, we usually make a definition of him or her, all by his or her appearance, such as the clothes, colors, postures behaved, and so on. This impression always affects our attitude and misleads us in the following interaction with him or her, while a person usually pretends to be one way on the outside but he is totally different on the inside. Nonetheless, I don’t think that snap judgments can never be trusted. All the judgment should be made by objective clues, if so, even snap judgments might be credible enough for us. For example, doctors frequently meet some emergencies and they have to judge what the best method to save one’s life is. Because they are experienced, they can judge the situation of a wounded by the injury’s location and degree, in order to offer the most efficient first aid. Or when policemen are tracking a murderer, they also need to judge fast by some subtle clews, to avoid the criminal’s escape attempts. Moreover, firemen, who usually site themselves in a dangerous position in the fire ground, need more snap judgments to decide which way to go. For them, a wrong decision might lead to their lost, as well as a slow one. In these cases, the snap judgments should be trusted, for they are verified by abundant experience. However, if conditions permit, judgments always should be made from all the factors, which can give a more reliable conclusion. When we decide to attend college, we are hoping to know everything about the campus, such as where its location is, how its surroundings is like, what the curriculums are, or even how the career prospection is like in future. These factors are needed to consider, and we couldn’t judge which college to choose in a snap or by gut. Considering the above two points, I agree that, some of snap judgments should be trusted in some conditions, neither always nor never.

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