Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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The lantern festival As we all know. China is an old country which has a long history in the world. There are many legends in China, the son of dragon, the Goddess Chang’s fly to the moon, and so on. Also there are many interesting festivals too, then, the Lantern Festival is one of the interesting festivals The Lantern festival is the traditional festival in China. It a day of the 15th of the first lunar, coming towards the most popular festival –the Spring Festival. As to China’s traditions people usually lit lantern to show their cheerful in this day-night. At that time, you can se e a lot of lantern in the sky, it more beautiful and fantastic. One party soil have a party, as for celebrate the traditional festival, different place have different way to cheer it .But most of them chose a same way, they were taking hold the riddle guess activity. Human writing down the riddle on the paper and then stick it on the color light to make people guess it. This way is very popular among person as it can awaken one’s wisdom and more interesting too. Besides all of those activities, it has another custom: eating sweet dumpling in that night; the sweet dumpling is made up of glutinous rice with sweet paste, amount of people love to eat it, so do I. Not only it tastes very good and sweet, but also it stands for unity and happiness. But it seems not more important than before, a lot of reasons caused this result. In my view, we should pay more attention to this festival, the traditional festival. Because it means reunions, the family reunion.