湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Online Shopping Ten years ago, you have to store when you want to buy something. It spent a lot of your times. Now, you turn on your computer and enter the online shop. You will find that online shop's the price is less expensive than the market's. You could choose which you like something,and pay for them. After three or four days, they will be sent to your home. But the online shopping have these problems. First, for example, you want to buy a hat. you can't try it, and you don't know the hat is your size. Because it is online. Second, something can't send your home, because the place is not set a shopping point. Last, when you have recieved these something, you found that these thing is bad, so you want to send back the shop. But you must be pay for the post back fee. In that all, I give you a advice that depend on your feel.