2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

可适当增加从句和长句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

It goes without saying that helping others brings great happiness to your life. Take my experience to illustrate this.Last week,i went shopping with my mother.With all the goods picked up,we paid for it and went out.Suddenly,we found a boy crying in the corner.I came to him without thinking anything else but helping him solve problem.He said he was left at supermarket by his mother and he couldn't find where she was.Therefore,i took him to police station and i didn't go home until his mother came here to pick him up.The mother show his thankness and i saw tears in hers eyes.Not only i but also my mother felt delighted. So,there is no doubt that helping other brings happiness to us.