2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

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As we all know that we are on the titrack of career within several months. However, i have never been neverous about it happening. In deed, in my college years during 4 years, full preration have been made . That is to say , i have take full advantage of my college life to promote my professional and commucation skills respectitively. In my four years of college , first, especially as a freshmen , most of the club in our universities i have been joined. In other words, as far as interaction is concerned, i have been developed fully. Second , because of my major is business english, more and more channel i can take a conversition with foreigner. Moreover, such as Canteen fair i have been here with my international tade professor. Actually, at that time, i have broad my view. In my college life, i have not only learn knowledge from textbook, but also real life. Put it in other words, it was in the university that i can prepare myself enough for my promising future.Last but not least, relationship with others is of great importance to my career. especially my major. More or less can help me in one or another. From the above analysis, we can draw an nature conclusion about the thesis. In the college life, we indeed can prepare myself for the bright future.