题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误;可将文中部分短句合并为长句,注意文中句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
AS the famous saying goes that it takes years to build trust,and a few seconds to destroy it,which emphasizes on the improtance of maintaining trust bettween friends.AS we all known,trust is the most significent factors to build friendship. Currently,with society and economy developing rapidly,the living standard of people has improved dramatically.However,there occur more gap bettween people.Consequently,to maintain trust bettween friend becomes a hard work.If you have a close friend,you need to be honest to him or she.In turn,he or she would give you trust as well. As far as I'm concerned,showing trust to friends when somthing is happened in the beginning is always a smart choice.It advoid you lost a friend at a few seconds .Everything would be solved if you just show your friends more trust or some patience.There is no denying in saying that if you have more friends,you'll have more opportunities to do something in your life way.