作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;副词使用偏多。
There is no End to Learn It old saying that never too old to learn that is say education is not complete with graduation. There are wrong concert that plople generally though study just books. There is no end to learn, because there are follow resons. Firstly, learning not simlpy study book, but learn culture or some common sence, so person need to learn to those more than the books. Second, before the 20th, there are no many way to learn knowledge until the internet develop. so people can learn with the internet. Finally, our customs teach us that learning never ending and keep in pace with age. Thus we need to learn with the age in advance. There is no end to learn before died. We are here that add to what learn it, but till what to life.
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